The satellite result would get stronger. The attribution and the Paris/ECS close would not survive. That is the opposite of a minor erratum: it keeps the albedo and rewrites what the albedo is allowed to mean.
01 Baseline
G2024
G2024 mixed CERES ASR/ISR anomalies vs 2001–2022 with GMST vs 1850–1900, then divided 0.25 K of solar by 1.48 K of pre-industrial warming (16.9%).
NZ fix
Use 21st-century anomalies for both radiation and temperature. A solar forcing measured after 2000 cannot be asked to explain a rise that started in 1850.
If adopted — reverses attribution
The 1.16 K “residual anthropogenic” term vanishes. Over Dec 2020–Dec 2023 the 13-month means move 0.43 K observed vs 0.44 K from Eq. 16. Solar forcing accounts for the surge, not 17% of a 150-year stack.
02 Counterfactual model
G2024
The two-layer energy-balance model already contains greenhouse forcing and CMIP5-tuned feedbacks. Zeroing ASR after Dec 2020 then calling the leftover “not solar” smuggles the conclusion into the tool.
NZ fix
Replace the EBM with a solar-only response (Eq. 16): TSI and Bond albedo, no CO₂ term. Compare that curve to independent surface series.
If adopted — reverses attribution
The paper would test solar forcing instead of assuming it is a residual. NZ’s CERES-era fit is R² 0.89 over 2000–2024 and 0.93 over Dec 2020–Jul 2024, with a 6-month lag of temperature behind albedo.
03 EEI as heat trap
G2024
G2024 treats the CERES Earth energy imbalance as greenhouse heat trapping and a driver of the surge.
NZ fix
Read EEI as the leftover after surface flux is adiabatically attenuated with height (TEFAC), a by-product of ASR-driven warming, not its cause.
If adopted — withdraws speculation
The sentence that EEI “brings us closer to Paris targets” would be withdrawn. The satellite EEI time series can stay; its causal role cannot.
04 Why the clouds fell
G2024
Only three mechanisms are considered: internal variability, aerosol cleanup, and a greenhouse-forced low-cloud feedback. Cosmic-ray / solar-wind cloud papers (2013–2023) are uncited.
NZ fix
The decline is directional over decades (against pure variability). Temperature lags albedo by 5–6 months through the record (against aerosol cleanup and a temperature-led cloud feedback).
If adopted — strengthens observation
The mechanism paragraph would stop treating greenhouse warming as the default parent of the cloud trend. The observational claim — low clouds, oceans, northern mid-latitudes and tropics — is unchanged and actually cleaner.
05 Climate sensitivity
G2024
G2024 speculates that if the albedo crash is feedback plus aerosol, ECS sits at the high end of current ranges.
NZ fix
If the albedo drop is externally paced, the ECS construct itself is the wrong sensitivity. The relevant number is λ to absorbed sunlight (~0.30 K per W m⁻²), not λ to CO₂ ΔF.
If adopted — withdraws speculation
The closing “hotter faster / Paris closer” paragraph would not survive. The paper would report a low-gain solar sensitivity instead of an inflated greenhouse one.
06 Window
G2024
The analysis is 2021–2023. The CERES record is 24 years.
NZ fix
Run ASR vs GMST over the whole CERES era, as NZ2024 did.
If adopted — strengthens observation
2023 becomes the latest pulse of a multidecadal albedo decline, not a one-off intensification of anthropogenic warming. That is a stronger paper, not a weaker one — the satellite result gets a longer spine.